Starting to look much better! I feel like she scrunches up a little too soon after Deb starts in on her second line, though. Perhaps give it a few more frames (and let Deb talk a bit) before doing the scrunch?
I agree, I feel her reaction would start more after Deb starts saying "so we can play another time." Also start drawing her face in so we can see how she feels!
I agree with the above two comments. I also think the plop down from hovering before "Hey Deb" is a little awkward, perhaps it's too fast? We'll have to change the timing on that. I think the timing for the rest is looking pretty good.
Actually after watching it some more. I think that it might just be how she pops up out of that down extreme. I think the pop up could be faster.