Here is some progress on my shot. I lowered it, put deb in and put the audio on. Also starting rough in-betweens. Let me know what you think of the timing with dialogue and everything else.
Starting to look much better! I feel like she scrunches up a little too soon after Deb starts in on her second line, though. Perhaps give it a few more frames (and let Deb talk a bit) before doing the scrunch?
I agree, I feel her reaction would start more after Deb starts saying "so we can play another time." Also start drawing her face in so we can see how she feels!
I agree with the above two comments. I also think the plop down from hovering before "Hey Deb" is a little awkward, perhaps it's too fast? We'll have to change the timing on that. I think the timing for the rest is looking pretty good.
Starting to look much better! I feel like she scrunches up a little too soon after Deb starts in on her second line, though. Perhaps give it a few more frames (and let Deb talk a bit) before doing the scrunch?
ReplyDeleteI agree, I feel her reaction would start more after Deb starts saying "so we can play another time." Also start drawing her face in so we can see how she feels!
ReplyDeleteI agree with the above two comments. I also think the plop down from hovering before "Hey Deb" is a little awkward, perhaps it's too fast? We'll have to change the timing on that. I think the timing for the rest is looking pretty good.
ReplyDeleteActually after watching it some more. I think that it might just be how she pops up out of that down extreme. I think the pop up could be faster.
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