Monday, March 24, 2014

Shot 7 Rough

So it's not completely finished, but this is the gist I was thinking of. Please comment!
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3 comments:

  1. Brilliant! I think this is really what we're going for. A few notes: The screens overall should be knocked down in opacity (not too much though). This will help with the screens and Jessica competing for the eye. The glitch effect is a great touch, it could be just a tad subtler, but perhaps what might help is simply not having the bulbs glitch much or at all. The bulbs glitching on the far right of the frame is drawing my eye, so maybe just having the screens glitch is enough. I love what you're doing with the variety of pop ups and warnings. I think the exclamation point can be vertical. Great work!

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