So the critique that Courtney gave on the characters was that they did not seem like they belonged to the same film. I've talked to some group members and we've come up with some suggestions!
- The eyebrows: Debra's eyebrows look like they are part of the form of her face, but Jessica's are clearly floating above her head.
- The noses: Jessica's nose is a closed circle shape, whereas Debra's is just a mark, perhaps if we open the shape of Jessica's nose they will look more cohesive.
- Hands: When the hands get more defined, they can also work to make the two more cohesive together
- Aldo also suggested separating Jessica's legs more at the crotch so they don't intersect with one another.
Hope this helps!
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