I've been working in the Lab today and I've touched base with Kevin and Michelle who were also in the lab. This is what I've been working on:
So this is along the lines of what Eric was saying. Push the camera in, make it more intimate. I was thinking of making the screen circular (ie more futuristic) because Kevin drew it that way and I liked it. We don't have to go that route but I think it'll look nice in the boards.
I lowered the camera here as per Michelle's suggestion to put us more in Jessica's perspective, and made Jessica shorter so she has a harder time pushing buttons.
There's one more drawing here of Deb looking shocked with a monkey face.
This is what I have so far. The finished product will have value and cleaner line work too. I'll be back in the lab around 6 today if anyone wants to stop by and give feedback. Otherwise I'll be keeping up with the blog if you'd like to comment.