Tuesday, December 17, 2013

S'more boards

Hey guys,

Thanks for the feedback, I can make some of those changes, clarifying arm movements and such. Let me finish up the last 15 boards or so and then I'll start on revisions.

Question about the "mirror".
Frankie brought up something which came to my attention as well. I forgot to flip the image of Debra in the mirror, but when I though of going back and changing it, I wondered if maybe having it show your face as others would see it would be a cooler technology? So it would show your face non-flipped? What do you think?  If you want it "mirrored" I can change it, but I think we need to make a decision and not an assumption.

One more thing. I have a cold an really don't want to trek to school today. :(  (I also dont want to spread my cold.)  Would it be possible to meet a little later on Skype or FB? So you can all give me feedback and I can do some revisions?

Also, I was thinking of what C said and did a different method of lip application:

 A bit more comical and it introduces the idea that you can really alter the face with the technology. Do you think we should "smear" her face more (Picasso-style) when Jess wildly swipes at the machine? Lop-side her eyes or something to give the machine more power? 


  1. Right now the facial changes overall are too subtle. I definitely think you are right about smearing her face more and making the changes (like lip application) more grand in general. I think when Deb has the change of expression from surprise to anger, her face could be scrunched up more. I dunno about having her eyes switch positions or anything, but we should definitely go wild with what the make up does. I love the idea of her having gigantic lips, maybe even half her face when Jessica is waving her arms wildly.

  2. Hi Allena. This is awesome. Although, I have some inputs that might make it better. When Jessica is in front of the vanity, her neck position is a little bit awkward and her skirt is tangent with the vanity.. And when Debra is telling Jessica to leave, I think we need at least one shot of her looking at the vanity and notice what have happened before turning around and telling her to go. Sorry for being nitpicky.. Keep up the good work :)