Thanks for the feedback, I can make some of those changes, clarifying arm movements and such. Let me finish up the last 15 boards or so and then I'll start on revisions.
Question about the "mirror".
Frankie brought up something which came to my attention as well. I forgot to flip the image of Debra in the mirror, but when I though of going back and changing it, I wondered if maybe having it show your face as others would see it would be a cooler technology? So it would show your face non-flipped? What do you think? If you want it "mirrored" I can change it, but I think we need to make a decision and not an assumption.
One more thing. I have a cold an really don't want to trek to school today. :( (I also dont want to spread my cold.) Would it be possible to meet a little later on Skype or FB? So you can all give me feedback and I can do some revisions?
Also, I was thinking of what C said and did a different method of lip application:
A bit more comical and it introduces the idea that you can really alter the face with the technology. Do you think we should "smear" her face more (Picasso-style) when Jess wildly swipes at the machine? Lop-side her eyes or something to give the machine more power?