tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3744755386662461509.post7483770619910691780..comments2014-05-10T17:12:29.340-07:00Comments on 118B Film: Hello Debra: Group 4 Meeting Update!Keith Silvahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06994860701964316088noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3744755386662461509.post-28791049379655638262013-12-06T18:12:39.733-08:002013-12-06T18:12:39.733-08:00Thanks for the big write-up. Sorry I didn't co...Thanks for the big write-up. Sorry I didn't comment sooner. <br /><br />The curved walls should be fine. We can carefully use value to show the change from one "wall" to the next. It should be fine as long as we keep an eye on it in layouts and make sure it continues to read. And the ISO is great, it feels like it fits with the characters. <br /><br />I gave Michelle some notes on the vanity design in an above post, mostly concerning the "table" part of it. The overall shape language is good, and the four bubbles are nice. I feel like we can really make her interact with it, especially since you're thinking through how it works and how she uses it. I think the rotating head would be a great touch, but might seem weird unless the style really really matches the 2D style. <br /><br />Love the mask idea, and having Deb move her face around to test it and see how the make-up looks. Fluttering and widening eyes, pursing lips and sucking in cheeks are things you see people do when they are trying to figure out their make-up, so that all sounds great. Also, turning her head to see it from different angles (whether "turning her head" is literal or means she rotates the model in the mirror....) might be good too.<br /><br />I love the new ending, its very cute. I think one final sheepish button push at the end would be good. Like she's thinking "maybe that'll fix it" or "final touch". By messing with the machine she's messed with her sister, and by pushing that button one more time, who knows what she's doing. :) Acting will be important though. Allena Hailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07108797141687690644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3744755386662461509.post-42622088510235148262013-12-04T18:12:47.009-08:002013-12-04T18:12:47.009-08:00You're welcome Keith. Hopefully it's helpf...You're welcome Keith. Hopefully it's helpful. I'm using it for visdev as well. Thank you for typing all of this up. Michelle Santosohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11882739219040856078noreply@blogger.com